听说读写,雅思的四个单项里,写作历来是最让考生抓狂的一项,听能听懂,读也能读懂,说口语吧,也还行,但是一到写作,就慌乱得不行,句子中的逻辑稍微差一点就得扣分,但是这又是绕不过去的坎……
到底怎样才能作文提分?
小mo今天就为大家介绍雅思作文写作的几个技巧,希望能够帮助到正在备考雅思写作的烤鸭们。
如何在细节上面提高雅思写作?
一、主题复述
作文的题目都会给出相关的话题或者相关情景,那么作文开头我们应该先对题目中的情景和话题展开描述出来。
按照题目所给出的内容,用不同的写作手法去表达出来,切记千万不要抄袭哦,改一两个词还不够,烤鸭们一定要把整个表达方式转述成自己的内容。
还有一个方法,烤鸭们可以根据题目所给到的话题或情景适当展开,根据这个现象浅谈目前社会中的情况,但是一定不要长篇大论避免跑题,点到为止。
二、表达观点
根据以往的考题,作文的题目中一般会问你 do you agree or disagree 或 whatdo you think 等等。
所以烤鸭们在作文中也要表达自己的观点。
保持中立观点,你可以说这种说法或做法既有好的一面也有稍微欠缺的一面,也可以引用别人的话来说明有人同意又有人不同意等等。
一边倒观点,对于这个话题你认为很好或不妥,你可以直接说你很赞同这种观点或者我不赞同这个观点,并且搬出你认为正确的观点。
还有一种现在用的比较少,索性不表达观点,也就是说你可以暂时不表达自己的观点,在作文最后表明自己观点就好。
所以我们在写作的时候,要注意自己本身支持的一面以外,对另一面也是要予以分析和反驳,逻辑的完整性可以使得文章的内容更加丰富细致。
三、观点分段
逻辑性想好之后,将你的观点的分成几个段落,确定每个段落的核心内容和主体,熟练掌握分段的写作手法,这个熟练指的是分段方式不那么机械死板。
拿到一篇文章,在同样的观点下你是否能想出多种合理的分段方法,而此基础上你是否能选取一个让人感觉耳目一新,十分巧妙的分段方式。
四、勿要画蛇添足
最后写完要回顾整个文章,然后强调自己的观点的,运用恰当的语言去表达个人的思维逻辑,语言只是辅助工具,思维逻辑才是主线和抢分点。
有句话说写的多,错的多,我们在写雅思作文的时候也要遵循这种规则,不要写太多不切题的内容,容易偏题。
其实雅思写作备考的精髓在于知己知彼,有方向有针对性提高。只有清楚自己的不足,对症下药,持之以恒就能提升写作水平。
接下来我们再来看看雅思写作8分范文是怎样的,烤鸭们快过来膜拜膜拜吧~
Question:
Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Sample Answer:
Lots of museums charge a fee while others do not.This essay thinks that the benefits of charging do not outweigh the drawbacks because open access to relics and art is more important than generating money that the government should supply in any event.
The main disadvantage is that high fees exclude a large proportion of the population,especially in less developed countries. Many people in poorer countries have just enough money for food and shelter.Exhibits are one of the few cultural activities they can enjoy free of charge. For example,Egypt has millions of people living in poverty,but also a rich and ancient culture and it is therefore important that everyone gets to experience these artifacts. Another big negative is that students and children who are learning about the world may not be able to visit. It would be a huge shame if art students could not see their favorite painters or sculptor's work in real life because their finances could not cover the cost.
Despite this,there are some who say that museums are unsustainable without the money they might get from ticket sales.They say that this allows the building to remain open and it is better that some people get to experience it,rather than none at all. To thisI would say that the government should step in and cover the cost because culture is as important as anything else it spends money on. For instance,in the UK,there have been huge government spending cuts over the last few years,but the museums have not had the funding reduced because of their importance to the country's cultural heritage.
In conclusion,although some might say that places of culture should be run Iike a business,the cost to the education and heritage of the country is too great and they should remain free to all.
看完这篇高分作文,是不是觉得都很好的运用了上面的技巧呢。除了逻辑性很强之外,还有一个亮点就是词汇用的特别好,不管是连接词还是引导词都很好的衔接者作文逻辑,你是不是也想拥有这么丰富的词汇量?那就一起来雅思单词打卡吧。
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